(not finished) Ugly.

No plastic surgery.

No cosmetics of any kind,

Have what it takes to make my face fine.

When I stare at my reflection,

I don’t see beauty

All I see is beast within me.

My voice is all scratchy,

Not fair on poor ears,

You’d wish for my voice box to just disappear.

Author's Note

Hey guys, this is what I've been working on today...What do you think so far?? Should I continue??

Reviews

[Sarah]

Really good. Definetly continue. Loveing it

[Aehr]

i think you should continue it.. its pretty good up till here, and i'm waiting to read the poem as a whole.

[L. Edward Neale]

A gothic butterfly pressed under the glass of toxic modern beauty aesthetic. Will she unfurl her lusterous black wings and shed the torment, to reveal her true spellbinging inner-goddess. I'm staying tuned. This could be good.

[Richy Moon]

It's so sad how the person looks at her/him, light they're depressed so they can see no light. Its a good piece of writing, keep going with it.

[dillonjensen]

I'd like to see the ending. Keep going.

[Pax]

i think you should. so far it good, and im intrigue for more..

[Cameron]

I want to see where you want to go with this.

[Lokesh]

Definitely yes.
-Lokesh

[Raven Starhawk]

It...I am not sure how to really write my comment. It is well penned. That is very easy to see. And I think you should continue, but is it you who believes you are not attractive or have you been told it so many times that you believe it? Basically I can identify with this because either way it is like I am reading about myself. Like right now there is a girl over on deviantart who keeps stalking me and trolling my pages because she thinks I am a "ugly b***h" who shouldn't post art there. >.> So I know how it feels...

[Amila Jay]

I think its alright. a good write :))