(not finished) Ugly.

No plastic surgery.

No cosmetics of any kind,

Have what it takes to make my face fine.

When I stare at my reflection,

I don’t see beauty

All I see is beast within me.

My voice is all scratchy,

Not fair on poor ears,

You’d wish for my voice box to just disappear.

Author's Note

Hey guys, this is what I've been working on today...What do you think so far?? Should I continue??

Reviews

[trainwreck]

Please do continue. I want to know where this poem goes.
Don't worry about specifics and making every couplet perfect. Let it happen, and I'm sure it will flow.

[Siren]

I think that this has great potential. You could end it with self acceptance or despair, but either way it would still be powerful. I think it's something a lot of people could relate to, as well. But, alas, writing is not about being relatable, but truthful. As long as your words are true, then you have done well. :)

[Clever Forever]

I love this! How relate-able. Not to mention the flow of the poem itself. Continue!

[Laura Storm]

defiantly continue. Can't wait to see where you take it. :)

[TurtleClark]

god i feel like that alot

[Dearantlers]

I think you should finish it, but it's so sad!

[Cherrie]

in this day and age people are flood with the media's snap-shot of beauty. It is our job to help children and young adults to love who they are and how they look. It is a fine line to except your bace-line and strive to grow and improve.

Your poem is powerful, because when your down in spirits evervything looks bleak.

[Johnny Joe]

I think you should finish it. This poem left me wanting more!!

[Mashairi]

Should you? Yes, please. If this is just the beginning, I bet the rest would kill (and the beginning already does ^_^). Well done all ready :3

[emilythestrange]

I think you should keep writing this.