Funny

Funny

A Poem by SuicidePact.

Funny how people change,

Funny how we thought it wouldn’t happen.

Funny how as children we think we are safe.

Funny how we trusted everyone,

Funny how there’s no escape.

Funny how we all grow up,

Funny how we think we can change the world.

Funny how dreams, hardly ever come true

Funny how we continue to do what we do

Funny how we laugh about nothing at all

Funny how we function when we need to run away

Funny how I never seem to know what to say

Funny how our friends never seem to be true

Funny how when it comes to you I have no Clue

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Funny how I find this poem beautiful.
Funny how brilliant you've crafted this.
Funny how I asked the same questions like you did.
Funny how the wisdom in this piece made me reflect on my everyday life.
Funny how I'm reviewing this.
Funny how I'll rate this 100.
:)
thanks for sharing another flawless creation of yours!
♥♥♥


Posted 12 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Experiment with the form here. The repetitive Funny is hampering to the eyes, but no to the ears when read. Change how the poem looks.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely write and so true , like the flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very true, good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


great

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the poem very much. I know nothing about rhym schem like ingredients but what attracted me is the theme. "Funny how we trusted everyone" really winked at me. When we trust someone we know that we may/will be cheated. Eventhough we are carefully careless about that... Wrote nicely

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loved it, it brings back memories

Posted 12 Years Ago


loved this. especially funny how we continue to do what we do

Posted 12 Years Ago


Funny that we love to live more when death is inevitable......good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


Funny how we laugh about nothing at all... :))

Posted 12 Years Ago



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SuicidePact.

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