Thirteen.
A Poem by
SuicidePact.
Today is your special day,
It’s all about you.
You’re finally a teen,
finally you’ll be seen.
You’re no longer a child,
That’s all in your past.
It’s time to grow up,
Wear your hair down,
And use make up.
Don’t let us down,
Don’t make us fools.
You’re old enough
To know better,
Old enough,
To follow the rules,
Happy Birthday
Dear Sister,
Happy Birthday
Young daughter,
You are now 13,
Welcome to teens
© 2012 SuicidePact.
Reviews
A wonderful tribute to your little sis.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Being a teen sure is a special time for a girl. Its a time of freedm.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Being a teen sure is a special time for a girl. Its a time of freedm.
:) my thirteenth is coming up in July, so this poem was very inspirational to me.
Posted 12 Years Ago
:) my thirteenth is coming up in July, so this poem was very inspirational to me.
i love your poem, but i am confused about the statement between learned woman, and learning woman.. or girl.. that may have been an intentional structure to the poem i dont know.. im not a girl lol (: but it may throw off men or boy (: readers... as boys we all assume there is some big girl club and all the girls tell us that there isnt... but the poem reinforces the opposite (: once again beautifully written! -s
Posted 12 Years Ago
i love your poem, but i am confused about the statement between learned woman, and learning woman.. or girl.. that may have been an intentional structure to the poem i dont know.. im not a girl lol (: but it may throw off men or boy (: readers... as boys we all assume there is some big girl club and all the girls tell us that there isnt... but the poem reinforces the opposite (: once again beautifully written! -s
Rite of passage into a teenager is truely wonderful.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Rite of passage into a teenager is truely wonderful.
Nice sentiment for your loved one.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nice sentiment for your loved one.
:) I was smiling through the whole thing...I like how there is so much reality in it.
Posted 12 Years Ago
:) I was smiling through the whole thing...I like how there is so much reality in it.
Wow, how lovely, Jen! I remember my thirteenth birthday, though was very long ago now, but it is such a great age. Ah, those were the years :) Very sweet poetry, my friend.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Wow, how lovely, Jen! I remember my thirteenth birthday, though was very long ago now, but it is such a great age. Ah, those were the years :) Very sweet poetry, my friend.
Sweet poem. A new type of closer relationship is in the works.
I enjoyed it. Lovely.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Sweet poem. A new type of closer relationship is in the works.
I enjoyed it. Lovely.
Awww this is sweet :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Awww this is sweet :)
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