Thirteen.

Thirteen.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

Today is your special day,

It’s all about you.

You’re finally a teen,

finally you’ll be seen.

You’re no longer a child,

That’s all in your past.

It’s time to grow up,

Wear your hair down,

And use make up.

Don’t let us down,

Don’t make us fools.

You’re old enough

To know better,

Old enough,

To follow the rules,

Happy Birthday

Dear Sister,

Happy Birthday

Young daughter,

You are now 13,

Welcome to teens

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Ode to little sis I'm guessing. You sound like the proud protective sister. Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


very well written , a nice piece of work

Posted 12 Years Ago


hh pretty cool poem, I can relate to it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is great for young girls. If they are younger than 13 they will dream about becoming a teen one day. If the girl is older, lets say around 17 or 19, then it will remind them of thier younger days. Perfectly relatable. :)

~Desinty

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great!!!Happy birthday to your sister. or daughter

Posted 12 Years Ago


Growing up at thirteen ... Make-up and hair . . . (oh, I coware in fear!) But, yes, a rite of passage.

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh no, don't grow up at thirteen, we all grow up so fast in society now and we miss a piece of growing out.....
oh, i could write so much in this, I grew up at 7.
old enough to know better, but what is necessary is being old enough to learn......
Don

Posted 12 Years Ago


:) i really like this, and i feel like i can relate to this, considering i am thirteen.
-mariah

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awww, so sweet. ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very sweet. Good job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 21, 2012
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