Thirteen.
A Poem by
SuicidePact.
Today is your special day,
It’s all about you.
You’re finally a teen,
finally you’ll be seen.
You’re no longer a child,
That’s all in your past.
It’s time to grow up,
Wear your hair down,
And use make up.
Don’t let us down,
Don’t make us fools.
You’re old enough
To know better,
Old enough,
To follow the rules,
Happy Birthday
Dear Sister,
Happy Birthday
Young daughter,
You are now 13,
Welcome to teens
© 2012 SuicidePact.
Reviews
Ode to little sis I'm guessing. You sound like the proud protective sister. Nicely done!
Posted 12 Years Ago
very well written , a nice piece of work
Posted 12 Years Ago
very well written , a nice piece of work
hh pretty cool poem, I can relate to it :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
hh pretty cool poem, I can relate to it :)
This is great for young girls. If they are younger than 13 they will dream about becoming a teen one day. If the girl is older, lets say around 17 or 19, then it will remind them of thier younger days. Perfectly relatable. :)
~Desinty
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is great for young girls. If they are younger than 13 they will dream about becoming a teen one day. If the girl is older, lets say around 17 or 19, then it will remind them of thier younger days. Perfectly relatable. :)
~Desinty
Great!!!Happy birthday to your sister. or daughter
Posted 12 Years Ago
Great!!!Happy birthday to your sister. or daughter
Growing up at thirteen ... Make-up and hair . . . (oh, I coware in fear!) But, yes, a rite of passage.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Growing up at thirteen ... Make-up and hair . . . (oh, I coware in fear!) But, yes, a rite of passage.
oh no, don't grow up at thirteen, we all grow up so fast in society now and we miss a piece of growing out.....
oh, i could write so much in this, I grew up at 7.
old enough to know better, but what is necessary is being old enough to learn......
Don
Posted 12 Years Ago
oh no, don't grow up at thirteen, we all grow up so fast in society now and we miss a piece of growing out.....
oh, i could write so much in this, I grew up at 7.
old enough to know better, but what is necessary is being old enough to learn......
Don
:) i really like this, and i feel like i can relate to this, considering i am thirteen.
-mariah
Posted 12 Years Ago
:) i really like this, and i feel like i can relate to this, considering i am thirteen.
-mariah
Awww, so sweet. ^^
Posted 12 Years Ago
Awww, so sweet. ^^
Very sweet. Good job :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Very sweet. Good job :)
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Added on May 21, 2012
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