Obsession :O

When I close my eyes it’s all I see

I open my mouth it’s all I can say.

It’s all I want to touch.

Just to have that scent, enter my body,

Just to taste what its like, would be just heavenly.

This obsession I have won’t go away.

This obsession I have it wants to stay.

It’s dangerous for me,

A danger I can’t escape.

Somebody help me,

Somebody try.

If I can’t have this thing that I crave,

I surely will die.

Reviews

[Wolfhilde]

This is a very good poem. I Had to read it twice (I did it with pleasure) to understand it. Very nice written.

[emman]

Your poem creates a puzzle to me. It is good. Directly stated. Very Good :)

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this is really good hun keep it up

[None]

Love this. It's aptly titled. Serious, yet playful at the same time. The deathly darkness of this piece is devilish. Great write. Well done.

[Skye]

To be honost, I was thinking it would be different then what I read. Still, it was a good poem. :)