A year ago today.

A year ago today,

We had a picnic on the beach,

You told me that you loved me,

Told me that would never change

 

A year ago today,

You kissed me on the hand,

You told me you’d never leave me,

Told me that we’d never change,

 

A year ago today,

We each made a wish,

You told me that I’m yours.

Told me you’d never change.

 

A year ago today,

We made love under the stars,

You told me I was perfect,

Told me I’d never change.

 

A year ago today,

We thought we’d never break up.

We thought we’d never change.

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww. this is quite depressing... because i can relate. Often times, we do think people wouldn't change.. but truthfully people do... whether it be for the better or for the worse.. it's saddening. This poem moves me because i can feel the hurt... and pain through your words. So heartfelt.

[victoria]

beautifully sad.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Aww, this is so sad. Thinking back to the old times sometimes makes me cry, but yet happy. Because sometimes I realize letting go of that one person led me to someone much better.. worth my time. I loved this poem very much. Such a sad love poem. But I'm into that kind of stuff :) Aha. You done a great job indeed.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[eglantine]

sadness is one of the most delicate and beautiful of all the blooms a poet can't help but to admire

[Missy Moooooo]

Awhh I feel the pain. I've been here. Let me know if you ever wanna talk I'm here :)

[Madeline]

awwwwww so cute but so sad D: I loved it!

[♥ Kinnixk]

So sad and sweet. I really like it :)

[Lexi-Lu]

Awwww this is so pretty, and so sad!

[Whiskurz]

A really well written piece......Whisk

[Sarah]

Really good and very sweet.

[zero binty]

The amazing thing is that the ending can lead into whatever direction the reader feels. Good job.