Little bit of Trying.

Try a little bit harder,

reach a little further,

trying is the recipe to success,

It’s the only way for you to reach your best.

So why have we become lazy?

Why do we always take the road that’s easy?

That is my question,

can you afford the answer?

Reviews

[dillonjensen]

Simply put, I love this. 98/100

[dontwakeme]

Love the last line!

[mariah]

interesting question. i think people just want as much as possible for the least amount of work, but not everybody goes that route though.
-mariah

[Geoffrey Savage]

Truth.

[M]

Very simple and to the point, yet it gets at a profound question. Nice. :)

[Mockingbird]

people tend to do things the easiest and quickest. everyone is in a rush. i guess it is in our nature to take the easy way...check the definition of remedy.

[Extant]

Well, because people are naturally veil, or says John Locke . . .
Hmm, short and to the point, just enough rhyme to pull in the reader and keep me interest.
"Can we afford the answer?"
That's interesting wording, to think what it would cost society to know how to be the best we could all possibly be.

[caroline]

This is a good poem which makes me ponder the answer to the question.

[Marie]

Actually, I can.

[Kiari Sabon]

because we have 2 fight are whole life once in a while an easy path is needed