Little bit of Trying.

Try a little bit harder,

reach a little further,

trying is the recipe to success,

It’s the only way for you to reach your best.

So why have we become lazy?

Why do we always take the road that’s easy?

That is my question,

can you afford the answer?

Reviews

[Renée]

O k
using the word...trying...leaves an out..
replace it with doing..or I will for these are words of commitment, devotion..

[ThIsDaRkRoAdToNoWhErE]

It's always good to try our best at something; whether it's easy or hard, we should try. Nice poem :)

[MandaBear]

Interesting. very thought provoking :)

[Suditi]

"So why have we become lazy?

Why do we always take the road that’s easy?"
Such powerful lines.
An inspiring poem. :)

[rivers]

Interesting reviews....Not feeling like a party pooper at the moment. The question and general notion that few are willing to look in the mirror and question ignored personal realization...For me that is where laziness lies.the hard way is where the real answers are found..."you want the truth? can you handle it ?....Not a question to the writer that makes an inspiring point...a question to those who aspire to live in reality...

[ba_mcfarlane]

I'm impressed to the max, how you bring to the fore several big stage questions, in such a succinct and deft manner. This is skilful, very skilful. Wonderful stuff. Great write!

[Brandon M. Whittaker]

Motivating and intriguing. True words are written here and in the end a question I ask myself a lot. Why have we become lazy? An apt question indeed. Great writing here. :)

[Sunflower]

great write (:

[Deandra Dawn]

Short, simple and right to the point. Nicely done

[InfiniteInk]

I like this poem because it's real, it skips past the metaphors and just asks a hearts questions, I like this poem because I can relate to it's pain. Expressive write!