Little bit of Trying.

Try a little bit harder,

reach a little further,

trying is the recipe to success,

It’s the only way for you to reach your best.

So why have we become lazy?

Why do we always take the road that’s easy?

That is my question,

can you afford the answer?

Reviews

[SlightlyOdd]

Short and to the point words are a good way to get your point across i like this poem it conveys a great deal

[Alpris]

Short, simple, deep and encouraging.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is deep

[Maximillion]

wow.... that good

[WILDERNESS]

nice....v nice

[ErikHansen67]

Short and to the point.
Introspective or judgemental?

[I Am Svetlana]

I guess it's a bit different for each person. Some are lazy, some are willing to put in the effort. But yes, we do need to try in order to succeed in life and get through it. We can't just sit around and expect life to be easy or to always be able to take the easy way out, we often have to take the hard way whether we like it or not.

[Corey Coreys]

wow, this is amazing! One of those poems that sticks in your mind :)

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

good piece :)

[MOON]

Concise , nice flow.