I miss you...

I miss your smile,

Haven’t seen it in a while,

I miss your golden hair,

And the things you like to wear.

I wish we had more time,

You’re always on my mind…

I wish you hadn’t left,

It truly was theft,

The way they took you away,

and I miss you every day.

Reviews

[just is]

Such a sad write, but so well written and expressed.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Such sadness... but i love it. I love how you expressed this piece.
I can relate so well..
Beautiful write!

[Kiari Sabon]

sad but i like it. but makes me wonder who they is though

[Mockingbird]

expresses sad emotion. it sounds ominous when you say 'they took you away.' who is 'they'...are they the white coats or the cops.

[Chris]

The rhyming is fine, the rhythm stumbles just a bit. It feels like you reversed the last two lines.

[I'm Just me:)]

awww i love this especially because i kinda feel this way now but he doesnt know

[Warren L.G De Mills]

Nice poem. Everyone should be able to relate to such a piece. We all would have experienced such a thing. A simple and well written piece

[Ken Simm.]

Simple writing at first glance but obviously actually writ very hard. Deceptively simple in other words. Lots of undercurrents here. I liked reading its elegance.

[Ayanda Mteto]

it is such a beautiful poem :-) flowing ever so eligantly.