I miss you...

I miss your smile,

Haven’t seen it in a while,

I miss your golden hair,

And the things you like to wear.

I wish we had more time,

You’re always on my mind…

I wish you hadn’t left,

It truly was theft,

The way they took you away,

and I miss you every day.

Reviews

[Pikachu]

I love ryhming! :D

This is a great peom. It's a fave. c:

[Extant]

That love we find that all our lives revolve around . . .

[Leigh]

You have expressed a very common theme to most people's lives very succintly

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching piece, well done, good read.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Simply stated poem of loss. You've got me wondering who you are missing and why they were "taken away".

[Angelic Surrender]

Sad. I know the feeling and can relate to this well. Great work

[David Kwaku]

nice poem, felt a sense of sadness but great write

[Elaenor Aisling]

Very sad, but expresses your feelings so simply yet well. Good work.

[Pencrafter]

I enjoy simple lines in poetry, easy to read and understand, yet still conveying clear images and expressing emotion. And in just a few brief lines you outline a story, with characters and personality. The only thing I might suggest, and it's very minor, is lengthen eighth line to add one or two syllables to enhance the balance. A very nice poem, this.