I miss you...

I miss your smile,

Haven’t seen it in a while,

I miss your golden hair,

And the things you like to wear.

I wish we had more time,

You’re always on my mind…

I wish you hadn’t left,

It truly was theft,

The way they took you away,

and I miss you every day.

Reviews

[Richy Moon]

:,( Well written, keep on writing. You're writing always makes it clear what you're feeling without having to stop the story and explain, like this peom does.

[caroline]

I like this it is short and to the point. Someone you cared about is gone.

[Cathy Wattam]

I like this poem but just feel the line "It truly was theft" feels a little too short and sudden. I wondered if it would read better as "It truly feels like theft"? Just a thought. I can always feel the emotion in your poetry, it always come straight from your heart to the page and that is what makes it so believable and at the same time, satisfying. Keep writing!

[koty bell]

wow that was deep........ that was a really good poem:)

[WinterIce<3]

I like this memories of our loved ones are supposed to bring joy and happiness to your face but... you long for them back you wish they were in your lives again but they don't very well- written

[Emerald Seas]

Memories of a loved one should give us comfort... yet we still long for them in our lives. It is a hard thing to accept they will not return. Well written!

[ba_mcfarlane]

sweet read

[These Haunted Hallways]

Excellent write. I sometimes feel this way about somebody I once knew, too. ='/

[Secret Valentine]

I understand the pain you feel. Love shouldnt have fallacies or any boundaries. Love who you choose to love. Love has no voice. our hearts are its voice. I love this poem. Good job

[quixotic_rose]

something everyone can probably relate to. It gets out the emotions and stuff. I feel redundant, but your writing is amazing and your word choice complements it well.