I miss you...

I miss your smile,

Haven’t seen it in a while,

I miss your golden hair,

And the things you like to wear.

I wish we had more time,

You’re always on my mind…

I wish you hadn’t left,

It truly was theft,

The way they took you away,

and I miss you every day.

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Sweet poem, flow and rhyme!

[Suditi]

Awwww.
This is so heart touching.
Nice work.

[Octob3r Star]

aw gosh : )

[mariah]

beautiful, sweet, and yet so sad. great work, you have managed to pull at the heart strings again :)
-mariah

[Desmund Tiny]

this one reminds me of the guy I loved died in sickness..... it made me cry ...great job...

[Sunflower]

this reminded me of my cousin that died this year in a car accident. ):
very good write

[♋ Iris ♋]

I like this one. Spoken so true. Thanks for posting~!

[Renée]

Bittersweet and well written ( :

[Aella.lives]

Short, but I can feel your emotions.. Lovely write. :)

[MissDragon]

Totally awesome. :)