I miss you...

I miss your smile,

Haven’t seen it in a while,

I miss your golden hair,

And the things you like to wear.

I wish we had more time,

You’re always on my mind…

I wish you hadn’t left,

It truly was theft,

The way they took you away,

and I miss you every day.

Reviews

[BlueJay]

The way they took you away / and I miss you every day. Ugh! I want to know HOW this person was taking... But don't tell me... I like the suspense and the guessing of it all. That's what makes this poem so good.

[Brianna Van Zandt]

Beautiful. Brilliant.

[Donald Cole]

simple, and meaningful= beautiful. I love it

[Deandra Dawn]

Nice. Simple and to the point.

[InfiniteInk]

I like this poem, but I think you should add a little more to it so your readers know what left, was it love, a dog,a person, freedom, sanity? Put some more meat on it, is what I think you should do, this is like a cruel tease to me. Other than that Good write.

[Priya]

Pain and longing expressed in simple words. Nice. Although I pray you see happier times soon :)

[rosemary keogh]

very good nice and simple yet full of sadness

[emmajoy]

Words strung on silver sadness. Missing someone hurts, memories make a little better, your poem says it all.

[Xerclipse]

very sad and simple

[Tabitha t]

this is sad... it makes me wonder who took who awa and how. that might be an interesting story in itself