I miss you...

I miss your smile,

Haven’t seen it in a while,

I miss your golden hair,

And the things you like to wear.

I wish we had more time,

You’re always on my mind…

I wish you hadn’t left,

It truly was theft,

The way they took you away,

and I miss you every day.

Reviews

[SuicidePact.]

thanks for your imput, I shall take what you have said into consideration!

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

Beautifully portrayed true, sincere and loyal loving heart. Appreciated a lot. Thank you for sharing.

[Wondering Mind]

A nice, moving song

[Thea]

Amazing rhyme scheme...Very well expressed from one's heart...Great work!
:)))

[MOON]

this flows so well and is pretty moving.

[Holly Soques]

This reads almost like a song, wonderful, heart-wrenching expression of your longing. well done!

[s.r.knight]

So much longing and so much rhyming. Good God I love it.

[Destiny Crawford]

Very Nice :)

~Destiny

[Geraldine]

I love the rhyming. Simple yet heartfelt. ^^ Good piece.

[S. Michael Long]

i also agree with michael about the meter, i get it but it throws off the impact of the final stanzas -s