I miss you...

I miss your smile,

Haven’t seen it in a while,

I miss your golden hair,

And the things you like to wear.

I wish we had more time,

You’re always on my mind…

I wish you hadn’t left,

It truly was theft,

The way they took you away,

and I miss you every day.

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

This is sweet :)

[Victoria Elizabeth]

great love the poem it really puts out who u are missing great job!

[Zion]

Feels like what I am going through right now.

[Eileen]

It's nice. It's just. That's it. It's nice. The flow is ok but it really lacks emotion and strength, you write so much better than this.

[ChocolateAddict]

Nice rhythm and flow.

[Cassie Fraga]

rhythm and rhyme plays so well with emotion... very nice write my friend!!

[Sophie]

I really like this! It flows very nicely and the rhyming is good.

[Honey54]

Awww this is sweet! Great Flow!

[Marie]

Sometimes people leave too soon, and it's like theft, and you always miss them...

[MandaBear]

Very nice poem :)