I miss you...

I miss your smile,

Haven’t seen it in a while,

I miss your golden hair,

And the things you like to wear.

I wish we had more time,

You’re always on my mind…

I wish you hadn’t left,

It truly was theft,

The way they took you away,

and I miss you every day.

Reviews

[Calypso]

Sweet

[SkrillexLover :)]

Truely great poem :)

[Shy Girl]

I found myself longing for those I have a connection to...that may no longer be with me or have moved on away from me....very good piece...everyone feels this way..but you brought that feeling to life and made it tangable to the reader :)

[Fragilebrokendreams]

... Its so well done and you can just feel the deep longing, explains exactly how I feel...

[emilythestrange]

I like all your short poems the best!They have more soul to them.Loved this,and it has....like a heart?Anyway,loved it.xx

[Susanna F]

Simply poignant. Thanks for sharing it. :`)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

It`s beautiful and lovely short poem! Romantic and simplicity express more than long phrases! thank you !
~nia~

[Im a reel vamp lover]

Good. I like it.

[Chantel]

So sweet, good write. :)