I miss you...

I miss your smile,

Haven’t seen it in a while,

I miss your golden hair,

And the things you like to wear.

I wish we had more time,

You’re always on my mind…

I wish you hadn’t left,

It truly was theft,

The way they took you away,

and I miss you every day.

Reviews

[stars are far]

that was so sensitive especially when you miss someone ..
well done

[CHRIS ANDES]

it ended perfectly
=]

[Aehr]

heartfelt... I can understand your feelings here.

[Pax]

very nice and loving.

[K-mo]

very good heart felt poetry!

[Karina]

Beautiful piece, i love it. Descriptive and emotional. Nice work(:

[Maryam]

Simple and beautiful

[Laura Storm]

This piece hurts. Where it is a common pain that everyone feels you have found a good way to express it.

[zero binty]

Heartbreaking. Being what is going on and having no backstory, emotion is conveyed with a questioning twist. Very nice.

[brigid]

very poignant poem. simple and elegant.