What's going on inside me.

Don’t try my phone,

I just want to be left alone,

My mind feels so weak,

I don’t wish to speak,

Sadness fills my bones,

My heart, nobody owns.

I’m searching for my purpose,

Feeling forever worthless,

All I can do is cry,

I just really want to die.

Author's Note

I wrote from the heart, I wrote my current feelings :P

so far it's the only poem i have written this week that i thoought was any good..hope you like it.

Reviews

[quixotic_rose]

I've had those days myself, they are the worst. I hope your feelings change to happiness! :) great choice of words and style to convey your emotions.

[Destiny Crawford]

Loved this! Very emotional and explains how some people feel on the inside :)

~Destiny

[s.r.knight]

This is certainly a big shift from your usual lovey dovey poems...this is saddening but very well written!

[Lily Mae]

I think when we write from our heart and soul it's the best.. and if it's how you feel then let it rip.. I think we can all relate to moments, minutes, hours or days where we have felt the worthlessness and yet.. we truly know better. It usually is happening when we let others control our inner power.. Just know you have a lot of people here willing to read, to listen and be for you..xo

[ChervenkovaM]

Explains how I feel some days :(
It's really good, sad, but good :)))

[Richy Moon]

Some days you just feel like crap :(
I like it

[Raheem Lyttle Kiyaga]

I'll send it to all my ex friends

[Sunflower]

i know exactly how you feel, good write

[Siren]

definitely how i feel right now. thumbs up.

[Alexis L. Thompson]

:( I like this a lot