What's going on inside me.

Don’t try my phone,

I just want to be left alone,

My mind feels so weak,

I don’t wish to speak,

Sadness fills my bones,

My heart, nobody owns.

I’m searching for my purpose,

Feeling forever worthless,

All I can do is cry,

I just really want to die.

Author's Note

I wrote from the heart, I wrote my current feelings :P

so far it's the only poem i have written this week that i thoought was any good..hope you like it.

Reviews

[rosemary keogh]

yes its a terrable way to feel. i think we can all feel like that sometimes. take a different view. plan a good night out with friends. have some fun. i enjoy your poems as i bet others do to. keep going, stay true, be you. nice work.

[RG]

Truly written from heart. Nice write.
Keep writing :)

[brigid]

so glad you wrote this one and posted it. even the ones you said werent any good were therapy and led you to this one. its a beautiful poignant poem reflecting your emotions so honestly. sometimes we just have to sit with the feelings. beautiful writing....hope you move into a more peaceful and happier place soon.....

[Amila Jay]

Can relate this to me .. been feeling depressed lately ... A good write :))

[Sugar and Spice]

This is beautifully expressed! well done :) I've been here before also and you've captured its essence perfectly :)

[Thea]

I've experienced it before...You've expressed yourself here very well...Great one.
:)))

[Donald Cole]

I like it for its base of reality. I worry about it being your feelings. Are you ok? I'm a good ear.
I know and I appreciate how you connect your feelings with your words. That gift.
I hope you are ok. You are beautiful to me....

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

quite a sad and showing the intensity ..you have really got it it into words.very sincere write .

[Shy Girl]

Sometimes all we really want it to be left alone. This speaks though of dispair and longing underneathe the bubble you create with "go away" type aura. My one friend would classify this as a cry for help...in that you say leave me alone...but your true self is screaming "why doesn't anybody care"? I hope that you overcome the emotions that led you to write this piece...you always write such lovely pieces. :)

[MandaBear]

Some days you just feel like crap :(
I like it