What's going on inside me.

Don’t try my phone,

I just want to be left alone,

My mind feels so weak,

I don’t wish to speak,

Sadness fills my bones,

My heart, nobody owns.

I’m searching for my purpose,

Feeling forever worthless,

All I can do is cry,

I just really want to die.

Author's Note

I wrote from the heart, I wrote my current feelings :P

so far it's the only poem i have written this week that i thoought was any good..hope you like it.

Reviews

[Fragilebrokendreams]

I say that alot of us can relate to this.. It is raw and just cuts right through everything and right where it hurts. Nicely done.

[MissDragon]

I can completely relate to this.

[Krista Weiss]

So sad but so amazing! I love it so much! :)

[Alex Vidmar]

awwww this is sad... :( i like it though you are very good.

adding to my library.

[Susanna F]

Well put, I do know the feeling. Hang in there, don't let it win. When you feel up to it, I have a detailed description of depression's cycles as I experience them, Depression from the Inside. But wait until you are feeling better. I'm pulling for you!

[Sarah]

Really good. I hope your better soon.

[Chris]

Jenn... fewer letters to type... this works.

Spirals bite -
down and down and around
and around and round.
And silence ain't supposed to be
that loud that it hurts inside.
You miss what you haven't
got - lord knows how
but you do.

You spoke well... kinda real too... might give a thought to breaking the circle of that depression... you're worth the knowing if you give a guy the chance.

Take care,
Chris

[Nobody.]

This made me sad.
And, that is beautiful.

I know the feeling well.

[zero binty]

This piece is perfect. You know what would make it beyond perfect? Take lines six and seven, and put the rest away. Sometimes it takes a little pain to put you on a path to do a little soul searching. Find yourself, and the pain fades into memory.

[FireFly]

I do like this! Its breathtakingly honest and, in all honesty, I can relate to it perfectly because I'm feeling the same way.