What's going on inside me.

Don’t try my phone,

I just want to be left alone,

My mind feels so weak,

I don’t wish to speak,

Sadness fills my bones,

My heart, nobody owns.

I’m searching for my purpose,

Feeling forever worthless,

All I can do is cry,

I just really want to die.

Author's Note

I wrote from the heart, I wrote my current feelings :P

so far it's the only poem i have written this week that i thoought was any good..hope you like it.

Reviews

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

When nothing is left except to cry
It’s hard to live , and easy to die

Thanks Jenn, Simple but with colorful words, beautiful and complete poetic diction.

[Blue Ivory]

Awwww honey, I feel bad for you. And yes, this poem is short, but to the point, so I really like it. I like the color you've used. Good job!

[Renée]

It doesn't matter how many..its the quality of what you give..and this is great !! ! I do hope you know..we all can relate to this..not a person on this earth hasn't been thru this ( ;

[Geraldine]

I loved it. ^^ Feeling the same. :D The emotions were really alive. ^^

[RachelKim]

Someone needs a hug!! Haha I really like this poem. Yo put such raw emotion into what you write.

[Rosalind Gale]

I want to say 'I love you' - and yet, perhaps that is too great a sentiment. Though through words can come feeling. emotion, and tenderness towards a person not yet known. Keep breathing my love - the world is better with you in it.

[Sophie]

This is beautiful, you can really feel your emotions, and I hope you're feeling better now.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

wow great rhymes! very good, really as expression and style...and screaming red color!! in this red moment anyone needs to be left alone, at least for while...
take your time and decision will come...
~nia~

[David Kwaku]

great poem, nothing can make a poem better than one from the heart, expressing your true emotions.

[SkrillexLover :)]

Really liked this. I hope you get cheered up soon :)