We used to be friends.

You were pretty, you were kind.

Now to look at you I’d go blind.

Thought you were loyal, thought you were true.

Now I don’t know what to do.

You showed me your true face,

you became a total disgrace.

You used to be my mate,

now all you seem to be is a cheap date.

I wish someday we will reunite,

Someday we can forget this stupid fight.

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I like this and many people can relate to this. I love reading things I can relate to, it makes me more interested :) Great job!

[WinterIce<3]

I'm sire everythig will be fine I wish it was a little longer but over all very good poem :)

[Tabitha t]

i wish this went on i feel as though it stopped half way through the story

[Blue Ivory]

I've been in this place. Don't worry, I'm sure everything will be fine =)

[dontwakeme]

The ending confuses me...why would you want to reunite with someone who your angry at to the point that you would go blind to look at him or her...perhaps it's just me, but I wouldn't want that.

[Kaylor Mason]

This is good. Close friends are a lot like rust on a car fender; they decay you, corrode you, bring you down a lot, they spread rust into your heart like rain. But when you try to take them off with fresh steel, too much of your own soul goes with them and there's nothing left. So you keep them around, just because life without them is no life at all. That's what this reminds me of, really: the definition of a truly close friend.

[CrimsonBlaze]

Ive been so close to cutting the thread with one of my friends and I hate feeling thag sinking feeling! >>_< at least there is hope im the end...

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

Very well done, it is sad when this happens between friends, but like the end of the poem there is always a chance to get through it and move on. And that is when you have a true friend :)

[Suditi]

Great work.
Especially love the invitation in the end. Brings out the many mixed up emotions we experience when we fight with somebody close.