The Candle Light of a Winner

Make her a candle light dinner,

and for sure you’ll be a winner.

She’ll tell every one of her mates,

They’ll dream of those dinner dates.

Suspect that they are jealous
cos they’re still searching for fella’s
of such sensitivity,
and loving personality

Author's Note

Co-Written by SuicidePact and Jock Engelman

check him out:

http://www.writerscafe.org/MusoFreak200

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

aaaawwww.... sooooo sweeeeet!!!

[Thea]

Aw...This is totally sweet! Nice collab!
:)))

[Andrea]

very cute.

[The White Wolf]

Who can resist a candle light dinner? Not me! Very sweet poem :)

[These Haunted Hallways]

Hehe, beautifully written. Ya think Mozart would be good with 'Meatloaf?' lol!! ;)) Great job! :D

[Geraldine]

Awww, so sweet and the pairing just did work. ^^ Lovely rhyming.

[Wren]

Great job the pair of you:) a lovely poem that sorta sounds like a song. A great write!

[Jock Engelman]

haha i rather like this poem (apart from the fact that i wrote half of it half pissed) because of its form of structure that is so similar to my own work, it allows the audience to zone in on the personal emotions shared because it does not use names or identification of numbers of people. it just leaves itself open to alot of individual and personal intperpretation

btw Jen, can i please publish it in my account too (seeing i helped write half of it :D )

i am going to rate this (even though it is partially my work) at 84/100 :D