Girls

Girls

A Poem by SuicidePact.

Fancy nails,

Pony tails,

These are what being a girl entails.

Wedding rings,

Fancy blings

These are things, that make girls sing.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


Author's Note

SuicidePact.
sorry y'all microsoft word had the green line under it, so i just changed it to whatever made that thing go away..sorry for my faults

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i will pass on the fancy nails and blings, but i agree with pony tails and i would like a wedding ring.... :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm one of those girls that don't need bling I would rather have that wedding ring though. This was a good write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You don't need the apostrophes on 'entail's' or 'make's'. And, correct me if i'm wrong, but "make's" only needs to be "make".
Loved it though!
93/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ok i may be wrong (because i have a little bit of difficulty with apostrophes) but i think that you dont really need your apostrophe in the following places:
"that make’s girls sing."

and in:

"These are what being a girl entail’s."

(other than that rating = 82/100)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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