Boy, we've come far

 

I remember when, you said you couldn’t date me...

Said I was too far away,

Never could come out to play...

You said that you’d miss me, late at night

Said you couldn’t be there when I wasn’t alright...

I told you it wouldn’t matter,

That we could get through it.

I guess deep down you secretly knew it.

Cos soon after that we began dating,

We see each other on the odd occasion,

Text during the day,

Phone during the night,

It could of worked much better if we,

lived so much closer

but secretly I think,

distance makes my love for you stronger...

for we treasure our time together

more than most...

Author's Note

this is about my current relationship...

he didn't want to date at first cos of the distance, and distance is harder when you have to rely on parents to drive ya!!

but hey eventually he saw we could make it work...it's been 5 months and still working :D

Reviews

[Andrea]

girl this makes me wanna cry. i am dealing with this but he is outta state and we are in the "isn't gonna work" stage.
this is a great write. the flow and emotion are great and your story is so clear and heartfilled. love it.

[SlightlyOdd]

Its really sweet

[Marie]

Sometimes distance adds closeness.

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That's amazing :) I'm glad for you two. It reminds me of my partner and I. Distance does make love grow stronger, because you really do cherish the time with them more. I really like this poem. Good job :)