Boy, we've come far

 

I remember when, you said you couldn’t date me...

Said I was too far away,

Never could come out to play...

You said that you’d miss me, late at night

Said you couldn’t be there when I wasn’t alright...

I told you it wouldn’t matter,

That we could get through it.

I guess deep down you secretly knew it.

Cos soon after that we began dating,

We see each other on the odd occasion,

Text during the day,

Phone during the night,

It could of worked much better if we,

lived so much closer

but secretly I think,

distance makes my love for you stronger...

for we treasure our time together

more than most...

Author's Note

this is about my current relationship...

he didn't want to date at first cos of the distance, and distance is harder when you have to rely on parents to drive ya!!

but hey eventually he saw we could make it work...it's been 5 months and still working :D

Reviews

[rivers]

The love you willing share is a beautiful thing...It reminds me of another time in my life when adoring emotion was fresh and new...Seems these days it's only a found ruminating memory when I play my songs to my canine soul mate...Water your RED Roses and they will grow, neglect them and they will dry and wither only to be hung on the wall as a distant memory of better days. Treasure these days, the present moment is where life is lived...

[Octob3r Star]

I had this same "relationship" when I was about fifteen. When I met him he was so beautiful that I didn't care how far we were away. The sound of his voice at 2 o'clock in the morning was all that mattered. I guess apart of me knew that it wasn't meant to be. Aw, the memories...

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

wonderful write. my regards.

[AK]

Aw! Nice piece!

[Wendy Seames Garner]

As they say, absence make the heart grow fonder. With the phone calls and texting, you are still together daily in the mind. Maybe, this allows you to really get to know each other better.

[emilythestrange]

I love how you've actually done this because it's about you.I couldn't write a poem like this because I've never been in a relationship for more than a week,and then I found out the guy was cheating on me with seven other girls.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awwww, that's so sweet! And yeah, i agree long-distance relationships can be tough.. but it can work! I'm glad you guys are making it work. =)
Thanks for this! It made me smile.. because i can relate to the feeling.

[MandaBear]

This sounds like a nice relationship :)

[mariah]

wow good poem and im so glad its working out! normally distance ruins thing but for good relationships it only makes it stronger :)

[Destiny Crawford]

This sounds like a nice relationship :) I hope the best for the both of you