Boy, we've come far

 

I remember when, you said you couldn’t date me...

Said I was too far away,

Never could come out to play...

You said that you’d miss me, late at night

Said you couldn’t be there when I wasn’t alright...

I told you it wouldn’t matter,

That we could get through it.

I guess deep down you secretly knew it.

Cos soon after that we began dating,

We see each other on the odd occasion,

Text during the day,

Phone during the night,

It could of worked much better if we,

lived so much closer

but secretly I think,

distance makes my love for you stronger...

for we treasure our time together

more than most...

Author's Note

this is about my current relationship...

he didn't want to date at first cos of the distance, and distance is harder when you have to rely on parents to drive ya!!

but hey eventually he saw we could make it work...it's been 5 months and still working :D

Reviews

[K-mo]

poems of experiences are the best! I like it

[Krista Weiss]

This is really cute and I'm sure you two are adorable together :)

[Southern Cross]

True love has no distance..Nice layout and form..Best of luck to you both

[rosemary keogh]

Nice peice.

[eatmills]

good for you. I liked the flow of your thoughts.

[Barbara Walker]

This piece flows well. I like how you reveal your true feelings of wanting to date him, but knowing yourself well enough to know the distance helps the relationship. Many people who are more mature in years, don't undestand the concept that we all need to have some of "own" time. Good write.

[CrimsonBlaze]

Aw I know a couple who are really set apart. And what you pointed out here was true. You never see each other much, but when you do, you guys cherish the moments. Hope your relationship stays strong :3

[Pencrafter]

I really like the poem. It makes statements of love and relationships in easy-to-understand brief lines. It reminds me of the old saying, "absence makes the heart grow fonder". Sometimes, because of being young or still living with parents, a distant relationship forces us to go slower and more carefully; and that could be a good thing. Keep writing!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A highly descriptive piece, frazzleled but meek at the same time,w ell done.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

very well described,,and your love is getting stronger so relation is going to be eternal.........stay blessed.