another love story...

Why can’t you see?

What you truly mean to me?

You helped me become who I wanna be.

We began to love, passionately.

That one special day, you on the ground, on one knee

Years past, now I’m expecting your baby...

I just want to thank you for everything you gave me.

Reviews

[Destiny Crawford]

What a sweet poem.... ;)

[khalid]

nice

[.....]

A lovely poem about how love can grow.

Blessings, Tammy

[?]

Sweet and touching

[Rae]

I like the way everything is a different color. It sort of strengthens emotion for me. Very nice write. I think my favorite parts are the ones in blue.

[Marie]

Very colourful.

[Jock Engelman]

i think that the meaning behind this is very easy to find and it is a very good progression from pondering and understanding:
"We began to love, passionately.
That one special day, you on the ground, on one knee"
those are my fave two lines

[Aravind]

Captivating, and meaningful.

A nice progression from questioning to thanking. Very well done here!

I do wonder what would happen if you could add a transition between the last two lines. Just try to see what effect that produces. (something like, "I'm expecting you baby, just to thank you .... ")

Great piece of art!

[Secret Valentine]

I love this, from the passionate words, to the colors to the real true emotions.

[Siren]

Awwww........ Such a good one. :D