another love story...

Why can’t you see?

What you truly mean to me?

You helped me become who I wanna be.

We began to love, passionately.

That one special day, you on the ground, on one knee

Years past, now I’m expecting your baby...

I just want to thank you for everything you gave me.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple words convey heavy messages, well done.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

this one is quite simple and nice too....i love the simplicity of expression..

[Maryam]

Lovely :)

[luna11]

Sweet poem :)

[rivers]

This presentation of color reminds me of a tapestry and your thoughts are the many interwoven threads that give it unique beauty...

[Sleeping Maiden]

This is beautiful.. =)

[Octob3r Star]

What a complicated time when this happens to women everywhere...

[emilythestrange]

cool poem

[MandaBear]

nice poem