another love story...

Why can’t you see?

What you truly mean to me?

You helped me become who I wanna be.

We began to love, passionately.

That one special day, you on the ground, on one knee

Years past, now I’m expecting your baby...

I just want to thank you for everything you gave me.

Reviews

[Cathy Wattam]

Nice words but I'm afraid I'm not too keen on the mixture of colours. When the words are good, you don't really need to artificially showcase them. These words would be just as good in black, plain type. Just my opinion though :-)

[zero binty]

Nice message across a timeframe. We dhould all attempt to be these kinds of people.

[J. J. Nightingale]

NICE FLOWING THOUGHTS ... ..

JASMINE :)

[sharonlee]

The stepping stones of life's journey... and the great thing about this is each one of those lines or 'stepping stones' has the potential to be a poem.

[Daydreamer54]

great job showing the diffrent stages of love! Awesome write and I loved the colors! ^^

[s.r.knight]

This was short and sweet. I really enjoy how cute your poems are, and I adore that you used the same rhyming scheme in every line :)

[quixotic_rose]

so short and sweet! love in its simplicity is so beautiful, very nice :)

[Julia Mancini]

This is a truly sweet poem about true love. Bravo. :-)

[mariah]

:) aww very sweet. i like the poems that have stories to them, like this on did. nice job, i love the way you put them in that specific order
-mariah

[K-mo]

this is so cute!