another love story...

Why can’t you see?

What you truly mean to me?

You helped me become who I wanna be.

We began to love, passionately.

That one special day, you on the ground, on one knee

Years past, now I’m expecting your baby...

I just want to thank you for everything you gave me.

Reviews

[Tabitha t]

:) this is a happy one im glad to have read it. its so simple yet its a story that so many people hold to be a part of their lifes.

[Susanna F]

It's what we dream of, and once we're there, it's still hard to believe! Great poem

[Archia]

Oh that's so sweet. I like how it passed on in the years, and showed how the love was still there. "That one special day, you on the ground, on one knee" That was the line that just made me go awwww. This was a really nice poem.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I really like this so much!! great idea, impressive order of words and colors followed by the sense...very good!
~nia~

[ApocalypticChick]

Aww this is really sweet... I like it!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is so sweet!

[Rasputin]

Oh god... that line about expecting a baby reminds me of one of Patton Oswalt's stand-up comedy routines. He's pretending to be a pregnant woman, screaming at her husband, "You put the poison in me!"

[Dayran]

" Years past, now I’m expecting your baby." That one lasted a long time. Nice!

[Angelic Surrender]

Sweet :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

A beautiful love story told in a very simple poetic way!