another love story...

Why can’t you see?

What you truly mean to me?

You helped me become who I wanna be.

We began to love, passionately.

That one special day, you on the ground, on one knee

Years past, now I’m expecting your baby...

I just want to thank you for everything you gave me.

Reviews

[TKBickel]

I agree with everyone else here, this is sweet. I love the traditional rhyming.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Thoughtful write thinking of that special someone. Nice future write with a lover.

[Sarah W. French]

beautiful poem I loved seeing the story move through the years.

[Aehr]

romantic.. sugar sweet...

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Sweet and romantic...

[Sarah]

Really sweet

[Tamia123]

The poem was grat! I love the simple yet powerful message and theme behind this poem! The colors were an overkill though :)

[S. Michael Long]

i can deal with the wanna be part.. its easy to read.. straight forward and to the point.. I love the expression of the proposal.. i hate the color switches though.. (but no need to change if it lends to your artistic expression) You are still and will always be, my favorite poet.. Keep writing! -s

[Alex Crow]

A true knight in shining armor love story

[Sunflower 20]

you told such a beautiful story in such a short amount of time, great job! i really liked the ending, helps me believe in the dream of a happy ending :)