What Can I do?

What were you thinking?

When you ran away....

Was it something you did?

Were you having a bad day?

How can I help you?

Tell me what to say....

I don’t want to lose you

I want you to stay.

Reviews

[Aravind]

One word - incredible!

Like your placement and formatting... Also by adding all your questions up at the front, intrigues the reader. (asking himself those questions)

Short and Sweet! =D

[Luciole]

This was really good. I loved your format. I have many people I'd love to send this to xD haha really awesome

[rivers]

Love it...been there done that. Questions with an answer what a concept. On the other hand I'm a runner...A conundrum of emotion smacks me up side my head...I like it!!!!! Jenn tell it like it is...

[K-mo]

I relly like it, nicely done!

[Wendy Seames Garner]

A unique poem, I like it.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

so sweet....and simply written with beauty.

[Richy Moon]

So mysterious, what did she do? But I like it :)

[ba_mcfarlane]

It takes talent to say so much with so little. Every word has to count, has to fit. One of your best...bravo

[Wren]

I love the word choice. Very well done, and also the way that each line is set out in that cool floaty style. Great job:)

[Secret Valentine]

i like this alot. one of the best short poems i've read. good work