What Can I do?

What were you thinking?

When you ran away....

Was it something you did?

Were you having a bad day?

How can I help you?

Tell me what to say....

I don’t want to lose you

I want you to stay.

Reviews

[TKBickel]

I love the layout, the short sentences and words, it drifts like on clouds.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice last two lines to end this poem.

[Aehr]

its really nice.. a very interesting way of presenting the poem. well done

[MoriartyMesa]

This comes at the reader like eight slaps coming from different directions.
Left, right, center, back of the head, across the wrist, center of the leg, left and right cheek. With the a kiss on the forehead, one gentle kiss.

[stars are far]

So great ..
well written .. and greatly said ..

[Corkee1808]

sweet

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i like how you care about this person so much.............

[Alex Crow]

It's everywhere, I love it, it expreses the way out thoughts work, not in lines but just out there! Nicley done.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

this piece is perfect expression of flow of mind, conversation between two people, or even thoughts inside me..I love it..thank u!!
~nia~

[Dayran]

New solutions involve new approaches. Nice write!