Love you forever.

Shower me with flowers.

Kiss me in the dark.

Love me forever

and show me who you are.

I’ll be your girl,

I’ll be your world.

Just hand me the key,

The key to your heart,

I’ll treasure it always,

We’ll never be apart.

Reviews

[khalid]

nice

[?]

Just hand me the key...beautiful

[Andrea]

awwwww so cute. this made me smile. :)

[Jock Engelman]

nawww this bit makes my heart melt!:
"I’ll be your world.
Just hand me the key,
The key to your heart,
I’ll treasure it always,"

[SlightlyOdd]

it has Good meaning

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Simply stated, sweet poetry of youth. Nice job!

[Legion]

Sounds like it could be part of a pop song. Read "On Writing Love Poems" and the author's notes.

[Michael G.]

This proves a poem doesn't have to be overpowering in language. And the form can be free and simple.
The result... an excellent poem.
Well done. Thank you for the privilege of reading this.

[Marie]

This is a sweet love poem...who has your heart has a treasure....

[K-mo]

you have a way of writing great poems!