Love you forever.
A Poem by
SuicidePact.
Shower me with flowers.
Kiss me in the dark.
Love me forever
and show me who you are.
I’ll be your girl,
I’ll be your world.
Just hand me the key,
The key to your heart,
I’ll treasure it always,
We’ll never be apart.
© 2012 SuicidePact.
Reviews
I love this poem. In very brief lines it speaks of powerful emotions and a longing for security of commitment. It would be nice if romance, flowers and kisses produced lasting love. Well written poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Again, simple without talking down to the reader, well done.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Again, simple without talking down to the reader, well done.
Another beautiful write by you and a pleasure to read as always!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Another beautiful write by you and a pleasure to read as always!
Very sweet.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Very sweet.
Awww this is SO sweet. Great job. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Awww this is SO sweet. Great job. :)
made me smile
Posted 12 Years Ago
made me smile
This is so cute, adorable, full of love... awww... made me smile!
Thanks for sharing. =)
Great write!
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is so cute, adorable, full of love... awww... made me smile!
Thanks for sharing. =)
Great write!
This is a nice poem
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is a nice poem
Nice poem...Very sweet and sincere...
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nice poem...Very sweet and sincere...
I like the purple :) lol Great job
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like the purple :) lol Great job
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Added on April 7, 2012
Last Updated on April 7, 2012
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SuicidePact. Not telling!, SecretVille., Australia
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