Love you forever.

Shower me with flowers.

Kiss me in the dark.

Love me forever

and show me who you are.

I’ll be your girl,

I’ll be your world.

Just hand me the key,

The key to your heart,

I’ll treasure it always,

We’ll never be apart.

Reviews

[dillonjensen]

By far my favorite poem of yours that I have read. The passion is quite evident with the words that you chose. It flows perfectly to me, and I like how you didn't go the typical route of forcing a rhyme scheme with a love poem, which I find happens more often then not. This is an amazing poem my dear, I can't wait to read more of your work in the future.

[s.r.knight]

My oh my girl. You are quite the love-struck poet these days! Beautiful work.

[quixotic_rose]

AWE cute as pie. the love pie lol. it shows an in depth emotion between the couple and their love. :) beautiful.

[mariah]

i really like this poem, it shows that to love someone you both have to mutually trust them with your emotions because once your in love, the other person has the key to your heart. they can make you so happy, or they can make you cry.

[Nautili]

lovely.

[Krista Weiss]

This is really cute :) haha

[rosemary keogh]

Simple and beautiful. :)

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Oh it is beautiful, its so sweet and deep I love it!

[Barbara Walker]

I like your purple font! Like the rhythm, especially in the first two lines. Like to see you expand this poem!

[CrimsonBlaze]

The color and font seemed to bring the effect of the poem and made it all the more better. Cute write