Love you forever.

Shower me with flowers.

Kiss me in the dark.

Love me forever

and show me who you are.

I’ll be your girl,

I’ll be your world.

Just hand me the key,

The key to your heart,

I’ll treasure it always,

We’ll never be apart.

Reviews

[MOON]

Love the line , show me who you are ? The key to love.

[Geraldine]

Just hand me the key,
The key to your heart,

--loved it like a lot. ^^

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

I just sat here and smiled after reading this, very sweet! i really like your poetry.

[Archia]

Oh that's so sweet. I really liked how the sweetness did come through in this, and also how there was a short story to it. I quite enjoyed the idea of the key.

[Missy Moooooo]

I love this, it's so sweet. :)

[S. Michael Long]

change the last stanza to never part, as never be apart, shows your influence and not his.. otherwise, I LOVE YOUR WRITING.. its exactly the way i write, so im a sucker for your poems LOL (: keep up the good work! -s

[Who Cares]

Very nice flow and the rhyming ties it all together. This was a ery sweet thought, shame love isn't that easy.

[Cathy Wattam]

Beautiful flow to this poem. I really like it. Great job!

[Wolfhilde]

It is a very sweet poem. I like it. well done

[zero binty]

Leaving yourself open for the warmth of love is an admirable quality. The desire to be loved is well apparent, but can be taken for granted by a lot of people. They suck.