Just a thought..

Just a thought..

A Poem by SuicidePact.

I can’t believe we’re together

When we met years ago,

I’d never of guessed.

That one day you’d call me your best.

That we’d find it hard to be apart,

I’d learn to love you,

and trust again.

You’d be my baby,

my one and only man.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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This is sweet. Like something written inside one of those "Thinking of you" cards. I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


An innocent, yet maturing love. The ideal that most artist try to convey in whatever form of expression they have. Very good piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice poem, its funny lifes little surprises. How things change, and how they stay the same. Really enjoyed reading this :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Another adorable one :)
I feel like the third line should be "I'd never have guessed." but I could be wrong!

Posted 12 Years Ago


your writing must be adorable in nature because all of them so far have been super cute and super adorable such as this one. It reminds me of saccharine sweetness, especially between blossoming couples :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


very cute :) it flows nicley to 100100
-mariah

Posted 12 Years Ago


Adorable :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


so cute :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aww this is so cute and so deep at the same time! Well done pulling on heart strings!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwww!!! so cute!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 7, 2012
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SuicidePact.
SuicidePact.

Not telling!, SecretVille., Australia



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