Just a thought..

I can’t believe we’re together

When we met years ago,

I’d never of guessed.

That one day you’d call me your best.

That we’d find it hard to be apart,

I’d learn to love you,

and trust again.

You’d be my baby,

my one and only man.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very sweet write. Two lovers together... and a nice thoughtful write.

[Aehr]

short, sweet and meaningful

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i hope you guys do have a happy ending together! :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I like the red color of the verses and dedication for love...
~nia~

[Dayran]

Losing and finding each other....and the American pie of paradoxes, like the heron circling to find the nest that is hers....is something we store so so carefully in case we forget. Like the store keeper in the Sumerian Ur says.... its only good until the next harvest. Nice write!

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Good flow, and good expression of your thoughts!

[MOON]

Lovely flow , short and sweet.

[Angelic Surrender]

Cute! ^_^ Nice job. Good description

[Becky Clancy]

Awww so cute :3