nature

Trees dancing in the breeze,

spreading bark and leaves,

I sit and watch nature’s beauty

It’s God’s gift to you and to me.

We live in a world full of beautiful places.

Why do we take it for granted?

Why do we insist on destruction?

 Are we just telling God we don’t love Him?

Reviews

[Missy Moooooo]

I love this. I am a Tree huger as people say and I LOVE this poem

[AK]

Nice!

[S. Michael Long]

that emphasizes the influence of the beauty you are talking about.. ( i know i didnt post it exactly as it was written, but you know what i mean (: -s

[S. Michael Long]

and maybe put, "as" its God's gift to me.. instead of it's gods gift to me..

[S. Michael Long]

UGH.. so nice..!!! i think.. get rid of natures beauty, because it is cliche' change it to this beauty.. just my thoughts.. another great read! -s

[Who Cares]

You make a valid point with the last line though i disagree that is the reason we cause the "destruction". We are just speading the room for homes, over population and such. Nice write though

[Cathy Wattam]

I'm not sure about the last line but otherwise this is a lovely poem. I love how it starts.

[zero binty]

For people who are less into the monetary possessions, this is a beautiful piece. For those in pursuit of the almighty dollar, this makes no sense whatsoever. Greed destroys.

[s.r.knight]

I'm not so into the whole God scene, but this poem is beautiful in regards to nature and Earth's natural beauty that man seems hellbent on destroying. This a lovely piece that evokes a lot of emotions. Good work!

[quixotic_rose]

people always take nature for granted but i love the beauty it gives to the world. God's creations are special just like your poem. I feel like its speaking out to the world telling people to take more notice in the beauty around them. very thoughtful :)