The Future.

I can see the future, when I close my eyes.

I can hardly wait, to approach its surprise.

I want lots of money,

I want lots of friends.

A great big house, on a nice block of land,

I want lots of children, that’s the life for me.

They‘d sure keep me busy.

I’d write during the night,

And work in the day.

Weekends for my man, when we’d get to play ;)

I can see the future, when I close my eyes.

I can hardly wait, to approach its surprise.

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

I love the rhythn and flow to this piece and your rhyme scheme, too! It's very upbeat and positive and I hope this is your future! Excellent write!

[zero binty]

I like this piece for the fact that it is an optimistic view for ones' future. Keep it in mind while going through issues, and the outcome will be more than worth it.

[eatmills]

I like the way you've bookended this and filled it in with you dreams. Nice.

[Pencrafter]

I like the simplicity of statement here. It seems to speak of a positive view of the future and the joys of simple family life. Some day our lives will be simpler and more full of confidence in the future. That's the feel of your poem, to me. Well done.

[Amila Jay]

Wow what a future .. nice write:))

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfection without preaching, well done, good read.

[SlightlyOdd]

Nice ...... that's all i have to say

[Luciole]

This was awesome! I too think like this a lot

[Richy Moon]

Hmmm... So streotypical but whatever floats your boat :)

[Wren]

I completely agree. But if only our future was so certain...