The Future.

I can see the future, when I close my eyes.

I can hardly wait, to approach its surprise.

I want lots of money,

I want lots of friends.

A great big house, on a nice block of land,

I want lots of children, that’s the life for me.

They‘d sure keep me busy.

I’d write during the night,

And work in the day.

Weekends for my man, when we’d get to play ;)

I can see the future, when I close my eyes.

I can hardly wait, to approach its surprise.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

And what a future that is indeed. Amazing what things can be seen when closing your eyes, all sorts of dreams. Nice write.

[Alex Crow]

Very optimistic, I like it. We all have these wonderful dreams of our futures and if we work hard we can achieve these asperations.

[CHRIS ANDES]

well, that's what you call confidence
nice write
=]

[Aehr]

very positive and nice flow... your desires of the future... interesting!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i enjoy this poem's optimistic feel :D

[Octob3r Star]

Premonitions are always fun

[Sugar Plum ♥]

i loved the repeating first and last verses, really I wish everyone feels so clear about the future, Happiness is for sure in simple things!! and children ofcourse :)
great poem!

[Tabitha t]

The american dream :)

[Dayran]

Has a nice innocence of expectation to it. Nice write!

[Ayanda Mteto]

Aghhh the tatalising success and fortune, how we all dream :-)