Women..

The cruellest of God’s creation.

Yet we let them run the world.

Their mind tricks,

Their bitter sweet kiss.

They way they make you crazy,

It’s all part of their plan.

You’re not in their master scam.

They’ll leave you behind.

They’ll leave you broken.

Without any hope,

Without any sense of direction.

These Creatures look just like you,

Maybe even better.

You’ll want to look,

You’ll want to touch.

But if I were you, I’d turn and I’d run.

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

I appreciate the rawness of your style!! very direct in your ways and you express well with it!! BRAVO to you my friend!!

[Who Cares]

Yes, woman can be like that but so can men it is just the person I suppose. Great write though :D

[Roe]

Amazing write

[MandaBear]

some women can defiantly be like that

[Jack Isaac]

Amen to that!

[Marie]

You've got this absolutely right.

[Kaylor Mason]

Thank God I'm a man. :)

[The White Wolf]

:) Oh, we are not all that bad!

[Amila Jay]

Yeah .. this is the raw truth about women .. well said, Great write :))

[Jock Engelman]

interesting perspective, i find that you can be very objective towards almost any subject matter, even something that could be considered "blasphemy" to your own gender, but i dont entirely agree with your perspective, it has been different for a few people that i have known of the female gender.