The love of his life...

I walk into my form classroom, a spring in my step,

As i watch the prettiest girl in world,

She’s sitting by herself,

Right in the middle of the crowd.

But when she spots me in the doorway

Her eyes light up the room.

Yes she is my baby,

The only girl for me.

I watch the faces of envy.

I don’t even care.

This girl, she has chosen me.

I shall never let her go.

Reviews

[rosemary keogh]

This is really nice. Enjoyed

[Maryam]

Beautifully said!

[Jock Engelman]

nawwww sooo c00t! (sorry for the coloquial use of "msn chat")

but i rather like the few ending lines:
"The only girl for me.
I watch the faces of envy.
I don’t even care.
This girl, she has chosen me.
I shall never let her go."

the lack of use of names i find is a very interesting way of keeping people interested. good write :D

[Cassie Fraga]

aaaawwwww... soooooo sweeeeet!! lucky is the one you pen this for!!

[Kaylor Mason]

Nice

[Krista Weiss]

This is so adorable. I just love it