The love of his life...

I walk into my form classroom, a spring in my step,

As i watch the prettiest girl in world,

She’s sitting by herself,

Right in the middle of the crowd.

But when she spots me in the doorway

Her eyes light up the room.

Yes she is my baby,

The only girl for me.

I watch the faces of envy.

I don’t even care.

This girl, she has chosen me.

I shall never let her go.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A very elegant and almost sweet piece, wel done.

[SlightlyOdd]

Aww so cute

[K-mo]

another great one!

[Raven Starhawk]

This is quite lovely because it is a feeling that changes you. The only problem I have is the guy returning the love. >.>

[.....]

Finding that one who makes your heart sing and puts a smile on your face is the most wonderful feeling in the world, especially when it is reciprocated. Nicely expressed. Lots of love in this one.

Blessings, Tammy

[Emerald Seas]

Everything is in the eyes! nicely written

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Love, there is nothing like it in the world.

[mariah]

beautifully written and so sweet. you captured perfectly how lucky the guy feels and how happy he is to be with her ;)
-mariah

[Marie]

This is nice...that there should be one chosen...