Happy Birthday.

Happy birthday my love,

Happy birthday to you.

You deserve all your presents,

A kiss or maybe two.

This last year has been splendid

And there’s plenty more to come.

I hope you like the gifts we bought

And the cake is to your liking..

Happy Year of birth,

Celebrated years later.

A celebration of your life.

Surrounded by those who love you the most.

You mean alot to us all.

We’ll catch you if you fall.

Happy Birthday my dear,

Happy birthday my true love.

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

A loving birthday wish.

[zero binty]

Much more gracious than the "happy Birthday" song. Whomever this was for should really appreciate the sentiment put into it.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Sweet, simple and courteou, well done.

[reflectingus]

This is very sweet, I'd actually love to hear people sing this on my birthday haha

[SlightlyOdd]

This is so sweet the opinion of this poem is very honest

[Richy Moon]

Very sweet and endearing

[K-mo]

this is a very uplifting poem, I like it a lot

[☯]

A very cheerful and lovely poem, it really does celebrate a year of happiness, and even more to come :)

[.....]

Again, good use of anaphora. I could almost say this could be sung. Nice flow and pretty good on the end rhymes.

Blessings, Tammy

[Emerald Seas]

Awwww... this is adorable.