You.

You.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

You kissed me, when my eyes were closed.

You held me, we were fully clothed.

You touched me, when the feel arose

You loved me, when you felt it were right.

 You chose me; it was love at first sight.

You protected me, when I was caused a fright.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Another 'awww' moment, I just can't do it, though, sorry.
But quite some sweet thoughts here.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nicely done, short and sweet and written well!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A phase I feel we all go through, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sweet and full of feeling

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple Sweet Apt

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice use of anaphora (repetitive phrasing) throughout this. We all look for that one person who makes us feel safe and loved and special. Sounds like you have found that.

Blessings, Tammy

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sweet, simple and loving.

Posted 12 Years Ago


very sweet. makes me think of someone who TRULY loves a girl. amazing work! :)
-mariah

Posted 12 Years Ago


You kissed me, you held me, you loved me...all in a very sweet love poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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SuicidePact.
SuicidePact.

Not telling!, SecretVille., Australia



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